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改进题：In the station,a telephone began to ring. The ringing was loud, evenly spaced and unanswered.

译文：在车站里，一个电话响了。 铃声响亮，间隔均匀且无人接听。

改进的译文：车站里有一部电话的铃声响了起来。声音很大，节奏均匀，没有人接。