Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences.原文:一个人的工作,究竟是三分成绩七分错误,还是七分成绩三分错误, 必须有个根本的估价。译文:We must have a fundamental evaluation of a person's work and establish whether his achievements amount to 30 percent and his mistakes to 70 percent, or whether his achievements amount to 70 percent and his mistakes to 30 percent.改译:
WE MUST HAVE A FUNDAMENTAL EVALUATION OF A PERSON'S WORK AND ESTABLISH WHETHER HIS ACHIEVEMENTS AMOUNT TO 30 PERCENT AND HIS MISTAKES TO 70 PERCENT, OR VICE VERSA.